Holy city, Kudus, is
a wonderful place to stay. First, there are two historical places. For example, we
can visit Kretek Museum and The Tower
of Sunan Kudus. In Kretek Museum, we can see Joglo House and also historical objects. Next, there are so many traditional food that you can try. There
are special food such as Jenang Kudus, Nasi Tahu Gimbal, and Lentog. I suggest you to buy all the special food in Kudus, because it is delicious food and the price is cheap. In addition, the town square in Kudus is a beautiful
place that you can visit, because there is a good park to do your sport
activities.
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Hi, Anne. You did a good job in making your paragraph. I think, you can add more special things about Kudus that can support your main idea about "Kudus is a wonderful place to stay". Keep it up!
BalasHapusThank you Mega :)
BalasHapusYum! I'm drooling. I hope I can taste nasi tahu gimbal from Kudus.
BalasHapusHaha..
HapusIf you have a lot of time or holiday, maybe you can visit my hometown to taste nasi tahu gimbal. :)
Hi Anne;
BalasHapusplease check whether your topic sentence is related to your supporting sentences.
I wish you all the best! :-)